https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alA_efamIgU -youtube
The feedback that I got back mostly was about linking the debt website and app to a big bank and seeing if they can work with me to help this business grow. I took that into consideration and focused mainly on that in this video and how it would work for a customer that would use my product. After that, All my other comments on my first elevator pitch were positive and people said it was good so I was just myself and explained my business plan.
The change I saw from my first video to the one I am doing now is that I look and feel more confident when I am talking and how I am standing. You do not realize it in the moment but looking back almost a month ago, it is like a whole different person.
Hey Janan!
ReplyDeleteI love the changes. I watched the first one and the voice and tone is much better and the idea is much more clear. I think this is a great idea and pitch, stick with it because many people need help with money management along with budgeting. I hope this gets created in the near future for everyone to experience it.
Hey there Janan, great elevator pitch! It's great that you are able to reflect on your previous pitch and evaluate it and grow in order to create a new and improved pitch. It's great that you are feeling more confident, as having confidence is very important when pitching an idea to a consumer - it shows how much you believe not only in yourself, but in the product as well.
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