https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66AAW7ySeE4
I only had one person give me feedback and it was all positive. What I did was keep everything the same and elaborated more on how to work the website or app and went more in depth with that. I didn't really have to change much since my feedback was positive so I just stuck to my good elevator pitch and enhanced it more by giving more details about the product. By not having much to change I switched the lighting and made it a little brighter and I also spoke a little louder to make sure my voice would come out clear in the video as well. Overall I did some minor changes but nothing that I had to work on to make my pitch any better than before. This is a great reflection to see where you have started and where you are with the class and with your ability to pitch a business and grow over time with it.
Hi Janan!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the elevator pitch the third time. I think this time you took your time when you were speaking. Also the tone could have been a little higher or there was an echo. What you could have done was add a little bit more information on what exactly the debt problem is like how you did in your first video. overall good job.
Hey Janan, nice job with your pitch. My idea was very similar, but I have to say it looks like you have thought it out more than I have. I definitely see people benefiting from your app/website. Nice job!
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